15 03 18

Every year thousands of university admission essays are reviewed by Toronto university boards. The purpose of these essays is to narrow the list of applicants to the students that meet stringent university standards. While no two schools share the same set of admission and essay criteria, these factors should be taken into consideration:

  • GPA
  • Your qualities as a student (including extracurriculars and strengths)
  • Your future contribution to the university, if accepted

These key elements can direct your outline as you draft your essay.

Here are some reasons admission essays get rejected:

  1. Grades don’t meet university requirements. Many universities are academically competitive. For some hopeful candidates, their grade point average may be the reason their essays aren’t even read.
  2. Incomplete application. One institution may requires three essays on different topics and another may asks for only one essay, in addition to quantitative data like test scores. Some applicants make the mistake of “copying and pasting” the same application for different institutions without reading individual requirements. Read each university’s instructions carefully.
  3. Wordy essay. Every admissions board reviews hundreds of applications. They are likely to quickly dismiss essays that are filled with incoherent ramblings. Write in a clear and direct tone and delete unnecessary “flourishes.”
  4. Vague writing. An essay that glosses over or omits important details can lead to rejection of a candidate. Writing that fails to cite specific examples (or an essay loaded with general pronouncements that have little meaning) will be discarded.
  5. Multiple errors. If your essay is rife with spelling and grammatical mistakes, it gives the impression you pay little attention to detail. Proofread your work and ask your guidance counsellor or a trusted teacher to review your essay and give honest feedback.
  6. Limited enrollment. Sometimes there simply aren’t enough spots for qualified candidates. In this case, acceptance or rejection may seem somewhat arbitrary, but a polished essay will increase your likelihood of admission.

An admissions essay is a tool that helps universities narrow their list of potential students accepted for the upcoming term. This essay can encapsulate a student’s academic profile and/or indicate their future potential. Some applicants may struggle to write multiple essays, which can be both frustrating and discouraging.

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23 02 18

The APA 6th Edition, Section 3.18 mandates that writers use active voice for clarity. Many writers use this type of voice in writing academic papers because it allows the reader to clearly distinguish the subject of the sentence and the action performed.

Active voice is usually applied when writers wish to emphasize the “doer” of an action without confusing the reader. For articles, the active voice is especially useful when the writer wishes to express their stance on a certain debatable topic while allowing the reader to consider a different point of view.

While active voice is preferred over passive voice, there are some instances when the passive form can elevate a work’s quality. However, before we include those phrases in our essays, we must first pay close attention to the verb tenses chosen to avoid inconsistencies.

Here are some instances on when a writer may opt to use passive voice:

  • When the “doer” is already introduced. Most writers use the first paragraph of the essay to introduce a topic to the reader. In this section, active voice is preferred as it helps the reader distinguish the doer of the action and any achievements listed thereafter. Once the writer has established the important “doers” of the essay, the passive voice may be used to add a touch of creativity and prevent the flow of the paper from becoming monotonous.
  • When the doer is unknown. This can be applied to research papers or discoveries whose writers or explorers are unknown.Example: “Cave paintings that were recently discovered showed the progression of the neolithic people’s way of life.”
  • When the focus is on the action rather than the doer. Passive voice works when we wish to focus on the action as the subject. This is usually used with gerund phrases.Example: “Drinking coffee has been shown to add multiple benefits for one’s health.”

  • When the focus is on the recipient of the action rather than the doer.
    The passive voice may be used when the writer wishes to focus on the receiver of the action rather than the doer.Example: “Tardy employees that were reported by HR management were immediately given a pay reduction.”

While the passive voice has been shown to be useful for creative purposes, writers should remember to use these phrases/sentences sparingly. Constant use of passive voice can lead to wordiness and ambiguity, resulting in reader confusion. Writers should carefully examine their work and remove all unnecessary phrases to maintain flow and keep the essay understandable and succinct.

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22 01 18

The goal of every resume is to provide a brief and comprehensive summary of your job history and skills while leaving a lasting impression on the recruiter. Since companies receive dozens of resumes per hiring season, employers who are assigned to sort through these documents encounter repetitive phrases which render the submission cliché.

Several online resources provide a list of key phrases to avoid when writing a resume. While helpful, sometimes these phrases provide the opportunity to share something valuable. Instead of deleting these phrases altogether, rewrite them in a way that makes your resume stand out, and provide concrete examples of your work experience.

Here are some commonly used phrases from resumes and suggestions to rewrite them:

“Works well independently” – Most of the time, this phrase is used as a crutch (and is usually part of a bullet list). Instead of focusing on the trait alone, provide an example that showcases your independent nature.

Example: “In 2010, I launched my own website focusing on providing young adult readers with tips and tricks to save money.”

This statement showcases your skill, experience, and knowledge while providing a concrete example to the reader.

  • “A great team player” – Teamwork is important is crucial in any workplace to meet company goals, but this phrase does not impress. Instead, share events that showcase you and your former team’s participation or achievement.Example: “Volunteered with colleagues and organized a 2011 fundraiser.”
  • “Results driven” – Results usually require quantitative data. To avoid this ambiguous claim, write about strategies you implemented which resulted in a percentage of change.Example: “Reduced the percentage of tardy employees by 10% by implementing an incentive and penalty policy to encourage them to be on time.”
  • “Good communication skills” – Communication skills are important, but this is another example of a broad statement. In this case, provide an example showing how your skills were put to good use.Example: “Prepared and presented a slideshow to job applicants attending the 2010 job fair in Springfield.”

  • “Strong attention to detail”
    – It pays to be meticulous with details but it’s even better when other examples are provided.Example: “I have considerable experience editing articles for an SEO company.”

If you rewrite overused phrases and provide concrete examples of your success, potential employers are more likely to schedule an interview with you. Your new resume offers a concise summary of your knowledge, skills, and experience — while helping you stand out from the rest of the applicants.

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4 01 18

Some students may believe that writing an essay is relatively simple and doesn’t require much effort. This assumption couldn’t be further from the truth. Writing requires a lot of time and energy.

Like most activities that require effort (exercise, working, cooking), writing an essay requires some preparation for both mind and body. Here are some tips to mentally and physically prepare yourself to write:

Get organized

Gather research materials and organize them before buckling down to write. When it comes to gathering sources from different publications, write each of them on a piece of paper and summarize the key points you wish to include in your essay. This helps save time and prevent clutter on your workspace.

Minimize distractions

If you are working in a public library and prefer to listen to music to concentrate, use a pair of earphones and lower the volume of your device to prevent distracting others. If you enjoy working in silence, use a pair of noise-cancelling headphones to block out distractions. Clear your mind of lingering issues or concerns; plan to deal with them after you finish.

Eat in advance

Avoid eating unhealthy snacks before writing and switch to brain-boosting foods like eggs, nuts, or yogurt to aid your concentration and focus. Remember to drink enough water.


What motivates you to write this essay? Is it to earn a good grade? If so, focus on what you want to achieve and remember to set deadlines for yourself. Motivate yourself to begin, but forge on with discipline.

If you’re not well-rested or fed, writing an essay can be more time-consuming than it needs to be. Take time for yourself and the writing will flow more easily.

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21 12 17

Proofread as You Go

When writing anything, it is important to check work as you go. Many writers do not check for errors until the very end of an essay; this can be problematic. It’s a lot less effort to check for errors as you write. Having a second pair of eyes is always useful; professional writing services can check your work and help you make improvements.

Be Sensible

If you aim to make your writing “visual,” you must be descriptive. Unless you’re adding pictures to the text, the reader can only experience an essay through your words. Before writing, take in the scene of a holiday greeting card, or write in a festive setting. Incorporate details regarding how the holiday smells, feels, tastes, and looks. Use a variety of senses to convey your images and meaning.

Know Your Audience

Just as businesses do market research, a writer ought to know his/her audience. What reading level is the audience? What’s their geographical location? Keep the audience in mind as you write.

If It Sounds Right, Write!

Reading your essay aloud throughout the process. Though a phrase may be grammatically correct, the phrasing could be awkward. Awkward phrasing is distracting to the reader, especially in an essay attempting to convey the spirit or energy of the holiday season.

Think Big, and Add a Touch of You

It can be easy to get discouraged when writing; most people do. Try allowing yourself to “dream big” when it comes to your essay. Push yourself to write 1000 words, and then push beyond that. Think up imaginative topics, and make it “you” by adding a personal touch. Are you funny? Add humour. Are you sad? Talk about how people get blue during the holidays. Your feelings and thoughts make the essay stronger.

Every voice is different and valuable. Keep working on your writing, and seek the help of a professional writing service when you hit a stumbling block. Call Masters Essay toll-free throughout Canada at 1-800-573-0840.

4 11 17

An analytical essay is one of the four main essays used in academic writing. This type of essay provides a thorough examination of a piece of media and later adds a personal interpretation. Analytical essays are mainly used for pieces that are open for discussion like an opinion, quotation, poem, story, lyric, and other similar types of written literature.

When creating this type of essay, the writer must aim to make their it comprehensive and engaging. This prevents the reader from becoming overwhelmed and potentially losing interest.

In order to write a captivating analytical essay, here are some factors to consider:

  1. Scope and limitation. After introducing the topic of discussion, set boundaries for your areas of focus. This helps you establish the tone of your essay without having later difficulty.
  2. Cite sources. After introducing the topic, cite sources that support your argument as you expand upon or analyze each point. Sources may include author’s quotes from an interview or additional information found in reliable publications.
  3. Use sources to support your interpretation. While this part of the essay is subjective, citing sources that support your theory can help compel and convince the reader.
  4. Finish with a relative conclusion. Whether your essay supports or dismisses a particular interpretation, finish the essay by restating the author’s intention and your analysis in the conclusion.

Analytical essays require time and extensive research. They benefit from a distinctive writing style with a balance of fact and opinion while keeping the reader engaged.

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6 10 17

A strong cover letter is a tool most every applicant needs to have in their arsenal. However, a number of people believe it is unnecessary and their résumé can stand on its own. Not only is this idea likely a mistake; its practice can negate any chance of being considered seriously by potential employers.

What a Cover Letter Can Do

    • Set you apart.

A cover letter is an opportunity to pitch yourself and convince the employer or recruiter to meet you in person. It’s main purpose is to “wow” and prove you’re a great candidate for the job.

Writing a cover letter is similar to advertising a brand. It expresses what kind of team member you may be. A successful cover letter warrants a call for an interview, increases the possibility of of attaining the maximum salary available, and may put you in the top two percent of applicants who are considered for the position.

    • Reveal your personality and ability.

If your resume is formal and fact-based, the cover letter may benefit from including a bit of “personality.” By sharing more about yourself and personal style through the tone of your writing, employers are better able to determine if you fit the company’s culture or philosophy. A cover letter can build advance rapport by providing a glimpse of who you are as a person (beyond a professional facade).

Why a Cover Letter May Be Ignored

    • It’s poorly written. (Enough said.)
    • Some employers don’t read them.

Depending upon the type of organization and the personality of upper management, some companies merely peruse résumés. If a potential employer advertises they don’t wish to review a cover letter, don’t bother writing one.

    • Some recruiting trends indicate the approach is outdated.

One recent Forbes article argued cover letters are passé and not essential to the application and recruitment process. Some believe networking, experience, and a well-written résumé are the only means to nab a job.

Despite a few changing opinions, cover letters still have a place among many employers and recruiters. If you are in need of a well-written cover letter to help you land that job interview, Masters Essay has staff dedicated to creating applicant drafts to land the job you want. Call today: (800) 573-0840; let’s start writing!

8 09 17

Essays are a form of academic writing with the purpose of making various arguments. They are meant to educate and enlighten. Although essays are academic in nature, they do not have to be boring.

Grabbing your reader’s attention can help you get your point across, and keep your professor awake as s/he reads your words. Here are a few tips that might help:

  • Include an Anecdote
    Anecdotes are brief stories about real events intended to make a point. Adding some small details is an interesting way to garner reader attention. Keep the anecdote short, sweet, and to the point. Use a story properly (but sparingly) in an essay introduction to use it to the fullest effect.
  • Use Substantiated Information
    The information you cite must be factual and backed by research, and doesn’t necessarily need to be new. Support your argument with facts that are explicit and direct. Elaborate your point with a few sentences to solidify your argument.
  • Have a Dialogue
    Good dialogue can convey a point in a unique way that engages the reader. It is a technique that represents an argument between two unseen “characters.” Use a short exchange between opposing views, and keep it brief. You can then explain/describe/restate the conversation and raise other issues for discussion.
  • Summarize
    A few, final sentences in the essay introduction will allow you to wrap up your ideas simply and clearly before you launch into more substantive portion of the writing.

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6 09 17

Essay writing is a challenge university students frequently face. Anyone who hopes to earn high grades needs to spend quality time writing convincing papers. Guides for writing essays suggest having a structured text, solid thesis, and reliable resources. All these tips are useful, but students frequently mishandle their time and make mistakes. Some of the minor ones can be avoided with a little awareness:

  1. “Stolen” Content
    Plagiarism is the act of taking someone else’s work and claiming it as your own. It is an offense taken very seriously in the academic and legal worlds. Students should not merely rephrase other content, but use it as a reference, with appropriate attribution.Plagiarism search engines are easily accessible; many professors use them to check students’ work. Write with a fresh, personal approach and use footnotes and other tools to cite your references.
  2. Excessive Arguments
    Professors suggest their students have strong arguments to defend their essays. Be careful not to overdo it. You might be tempted to fill your essays with as many statistics and quotes as possible, but this can work to your detriment. Too many disconnected facts or statements make for muddled work. Keep your arguments focused. Shorter essays should be limited to approximately three main arguments to keep everything connected and orderly.
  3. Unrevised Papers
    You have spent a considerable amount of time mulling over your essay and writing to the best of your abilities, and then — finally, it’s finished. However, your work is not yet done. Take a short break and then give it a second read. You might start noticing some opportunities for improvement. Whether some statements need tweaking, or you catch some spelling errors, it’s best to review and revise at least twice before handing in your essay.

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28 08 17

Reading, for many, is a visceral response to words on a page. When viewing from the critical lens of reader-response theory, meaning is extracted through reading. Literature becomes a transaction between the reader and the text. The reader’s personal experience is used to evaluate the meaning of the work.

Connection with the text differs the reader-response approach from other literary studies. Reader-response criticism requires the reader to discover the meaning of the text by considering their emotional response and personal experience while reading. This literary theory renders each text or novel open to multiple interpretations.

The Textual Interpretation

Here’s how to outline a literary analysis essay:

  • Intro: The Hook
    Your thesis statement is the heart that beats life into the essay. Make it count. Incorporate the name of the author and the title of the text in your beginning paragraph.
  • Body: Textual Evidence
    Textual evidence involves quoting phrases from the chosen text to justify your arguments. Since it is a form of evidence, citing should be followed with a page number at the end of the quoted phrase or statement. For example, if you are doing a critical reading of Haruki Murakami’s Hear the Wind Sing, you might write:
  • Murakami writes, “At which point I had discovered that I had turned into a person incapable of expressing more than half of what he felt” (72).
  • As you read through the assigned text, there will be phrases or sentences that stir up responses in you. Have a pen and paper handy to record every response.
  • Here are some questions to help you approach the short story or novel and present a paper supporting your thesis.
  • How does the book affect you?
    Every form of literature is written with a reader or listener in mind. Ideally, it employs a tone capable of evoking emotions that may remind you of your past or propels you to the future.
  • Does the text support your worldview?
    Cite a quotation in your essay to support your stance.
  • Are any of your opinions strengthened or challenged?
    Write in detail (with quoted passages from the book to illustrate your point) why it moved you or failed to win you over.
  • Does it tackle significant social issues?
    Give concrete examples from the book. Reflect upon how it portrays or addresses issues in society.


Go back to your thesis statement and summarize your critical analysis in one paragraph. You can also include your overall impression of the text and if you believe others will benefit from reading it.

Remember that although this type of essay is centred on you as the reader, you are still writing a critical paper. Avoid using phrases like “in my opinion” and “I think.” Focus on the overall value of the work and back it up with textual evidence.

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